Hey Mr O, I've go something to say and language in which to say it!

On my essay “Let Go Someone You Love”, Emily and I had a great conversation, a dialogue that helped me to understand an important thing that I’ve never thought of. She wrote what she felt about this essay, her thoughts, ideas, questions, which is really important for me because I wanted to know how people felt about this essay, and also wanted to develop my writing skills. I really liked that she asked me some questions that I didn’t really think about; she tried to make me think in a different way, to think about it deeply. I also liked that she gave me an example from Bible, because in the Bible, it talks a lot about love, relationships, and it is one of the important things that we have to think about. Do we really love our enemies? Do we really love God? This conversation taught me that we really have to think out of the box, be more specific, and make people think. I’m really glad I got the reader’s attention, and as Emily said, I did. This dialogue proved that i can make my readers feel sertain ways. I hope to expand my writing skills.