Thursday, May 8, 2014

Awesome Words


Dickens, Charles.  A Tale of Two Cities. Mineola, New York:  Dover Publications, Inc., 1999. Print.

1)      “In England, there was scarcely an amount of order and protection to justify much national boasting” (2).

2)      “Thus did the year one thousand seven hundred and seventy-five conduct their Greatnesses, and myriads of small creatures – the creatures of this chronicle among the rest – along the roads that lay before them” (3).

3)      “The Dover road lay, as to him, beyond the Dover mail, as it lumbered up Shooter’s Hill” (3).

4)      “There was a steaming mist in all the hollows, and it had roamed in its forlornness up the hill, like an evil spirit, seeking rest and finding none” (4).

5)      “The last burst carried the mail to summit of the hill” (5).

6)      “Completing his resemblance to a man who was sitting for his portrait, Mr.Lorry dropped off to sleep” (13).

7)      “It thundered at the town, and thundered at the cliffs, and brought the coast down, madly” (13).

8)      “A bottle of good claret after dinner does a digger in the red coals no harm, otherwise than as it has a tendency to throw him out of work” (14).

9)      “As if they had any help for anybody in their absurd baskets” (15).

10)   “After a pause, he added, again settling the crisp flaxen wig at the ears” (15).

11)   “Mr.Lorry took the hesitating little hand that confidingly advanced to take his, and he put it with some ceremony to his lips” (17).

12)   “As he said the words he looked down, with an admiring pity, on the flowing golden hair” (18).

13)   “So close was her hold upon his arm, that he feared to detach himself lest he should hurt her” (19).

14)   “The hands of the man who sawed the wood, left red marks on the billets” (21).

15)   “Hunger was repeated in every fragment of the small modicum of firewood that the man sawed off” (22).

16)   “Nothing was represented in a flourishing condition, save tools and weapons” (23).

17)   “Good-humoured-looking on the whole, but implacable-looking, too” (24).

18)   “The immortal creature that was to be so shamefully mangled, was the sight” (46).

19)   “That was merely a coincidences” (51).

20)   “There was such commiseration for her as she was removed, and much sympathy with her father” (57).

21)   “Only his daughter had the power of charming this black brooding from his mind” (60).

22)   “Carton flung his glass over his shoulder against the wall, where it shivered to pieces” (63).

23)   “A quainter corner than the corner where the Doctor lived, was not to be found in London” (69).

24)   “I will not say with me, though he had business relations with me many with me many years ago, and we are now intimate” (73).

25)   “But, no Hundreds of people came to see the sights, and Mr.Lorry looked in vain for the fulfilment of Miss Pross’s prediction” (75).

26)   “The night was so sultry, that although they sat with doors and windows open, they were overpowered by heat” (77).

27)   “The exquisite gentlemen of the finest breeding wore little pendent trinkets that chinked as they languidly moved” (82).

28)   “The nose, beautifully formed otherwise, was very slightly pinched at the top of each nostril” (83).

29)   “Why does he make that abominable noise?” (84).

30)   “A round room, in one of the chateau’s four extinguisher-topped towers” (91).

31)   “I will say with the fair daughter to whom he is so devotedly attached, and who is so devotedly attached to him?” (73).

32)   “Touch that string, and he instantly changes for the worse” (74).

33)   “She had installed herself, some time before, as Mr.Lorry’s cup bearer” (75).

34)   “A multitude of people, and yet a solitude” (77).

35)   “I ask no questions and make no stipulations” (78).

36)   “The Marquis took a gentle little pinch of snuff, and shook his head” (93).

37)   “It was Stryver’s grand peculiarity that he always seemed too big for any place, or place” (109).

38)   “Be under no apprehension, Miss Manette, of my ever resuming this conversation by so much as a passing word” (116).

39)   “The young gentlemen uttered this exultant sound with mysterious significance” (118).

40)   “If, as a honest tradesman, my wenturs goes wrong to-night” (121).

41)   “Your fishing-rod gets rather rusty” (121).

42)   “As they descend the hill like madmen running a race, he falls” (129).

43)   “The phantom that my mind pursued, was another and more real child” (146).

44)   “But, in the composure of his manner was unaltered” (149).

45)   “It was not for his friend to abate that confidence” (157).

46)   “Here and there, especially at first, the inundation started on them and swept by” (168).

47)   “There was a heavy lumbering of wheels within hearing” (217).

48)   “At every vote, the populace set up a shout of applause” (221).

49)   “Sheep was a cant word of the time for a spy” (230).

50)   “But, it beckoned him back in his sleep, and showed itself in shinning forms” (270).

Hey Mr O, I can write!

Is it easy to love the father you never saw? There are a lot of sufferings, failings, difficult situations, and problems in our lives but the question consists in how we overcome them. It is like a soldier who lost a foot in the war and came home, trying to live despite of all contributions, and just being happy that he is alive. Likewise Lucie, who is happy that her father is alive and with her right now, however she never met him. I want to speak up on behalf of Lucie. Lucie is a character from Charles Dickens's book "A Tale of Two Cities". I want you to picture Lucie's story, and to feel the way she felt. My name is Lucie Manette. I was raised by my mother in English traditions. All my childhood and youth I considered myself as an orphan because I thought I don't have a father until I turned twenty years old, when I found out that my father is alive. My life changed completely from this moment. My life was divided into two parts, "before" and "after". I was confused what I should do in the future. At that moment, I had to make a big decision whether I believe that it is my father, to love him and be his daughter, or not excepting this person knowing that he is my father. But for me, the only option was to accept him because I already loved him. When he first saw me you could see it in his eyes that he did not understand what was going on, he didn't know who I am but he recognized me by my mother's hair. When I was looking at him, my heart was full of love and pity. I thought that I was waiting for this moment for my whole life. Here is my father, who never was in my life, and never knew me. I was deprived of his love and care, but at this moment I precisely knew that I want to be with my father, I want to know him, and to be ready to do everything to help him to return to normal life. Lucie's loving, thoughtful decision changed her life in beneficial way to do everything possible for her father to come back to normal life brought a powerful change in his life. He started forgetting the terrible part of his life when he was in prison, thanks to his lovely daughter who except him in spite of risk that he is a stranger. For Dr.Manette, Lucie was a light to his world. She gave him a strong will to live which made him a new person.



The tone I use in this essay is strong but is weak at times because of the sad story. One of my favorite strong quotes with a strong tone is "He started forgetting the terrible part of his life when he was in prison, thanks to his lovely daughter who except him in spite of risk that he is a stranger". One of my favorite quotes with passion is " All my childhood and youth I considered myself as an orphan because I thought I don't have a father until I turned twenty years old, when I found out that my father is alive". In this essay I also use figurative language. A type of figurative language that I use is a simile. A simile where I compare Lucie to a soldier "It is like a soldier who lost a foot in the war and came home, trying to live despite of all contributions, and just being happy that he is alive. Likewise Lucie, who is happy that her father is alive and with her right now, however she never met him". I mostly have simple sentences, as you can see throughout my essay, because I wanted to make sure that the reader would not get depressed because of the overly sorrowful story. A place where I have a detail is when I talk about Lucie’s loving decision "Lucie's loving decision to do everything possible for her father to come back to normal life brought a powerful change in his life". In this essay I tried to use a simple diction so that normal average people would be able to understand my writing without having to look up words. My favorite imagery in this essay is in the sentence "Lucie's loving, thoughtful decision changed her life in beneficial way to do everything possible for her father to come back to normal life brought a powerful change in his life". 





Hey Mr O, I've go something to say and language in which to say it!


On my essay “Let Go Someone You Love”, Emily and I had a great conversation, a dialogue that helped me to understand an important thing that I’ve never thought of. She wrote what she felt about this essay, her thoughts, ideas, questions, which is really important for me because I wanted to know how people felt about this essay, and also wanted to develop my writing skills. I really liked that she asked me some questions that I didn’t really think about; she tried to make me think in a different way, to think about it deeply. I also liked that she gave me an example from Bible, because in the Bible, it talks a lot about love, relationships, and it is one of the important things that we have to think about. Do we really love our enemies? Do we really love God? This conversation taught me that we really have to think out of the box, be more specific, and make people think. I’m really glad I got the reader’s attention, and as Emily said, I did. This dialogue proved that i can make my readers feel sertain ways. I hope to expand my writing skills.